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Post by labyrinth on May 2, 2006 17:19:07 GMT -5
really good! i like it.
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Post by ienzo6 on May 2, 2006 18:48:05 GMT -5
that's deep... it's quite good.
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Post by hermione7lunaroc on May 2, 2006 20:05:24 GMT -5
Thanks . . .I try to write as true to life as I can . . . I'm not very shallow and it is my hope that my writing isn't either . . .
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Post by melody on May 2, 2006 20:07:03 GMT -5
I really like it - Me being as sappy as I am, cried by the end of it. Yes. I like the story very much
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Post by hermione7lunaroc on May 2, 2006 20:11:49 GMT -5
If this made you cry you should read some other stuff I've written. At least in the end of this one the guy learned his lesson. Sometimes there is no lesson to be learned.
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Post by melody on May 2, 2006 20:18:40 GMT -5
Yes. But then again, I cry on everything - Even with some song lyrics. But, truly, I was crying after three sentences off your story. Good Job
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Post by hermione7lunaroc on May 2, 2006 20:40:22 GMT -5
Three sentences into the beginning or three sentences before the end?
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Post by melody on May 2, 2006 21:06:54 GMT -5
Beginning... I'm so stupid xD
5 sentences... not 3
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Post by scottmichael on May 5, 2006 14:16:38 GMT -5
I agree with Patrick, it is a very deep writing. And the message is very true. Lesson learned, lesson to be remembered by those who read.
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