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Post by riley on May 19, 2006 22:31:46 GMT -5
Hehe, yeah thanks. But, I need to work on my grammer *edit* so it's easier too read. I'm a ditz sometimes.
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Post by ienzo6 on May 19, 2006 22:33:12 GMT -5
We all are at some point, don't worry about it.
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Post by cris on May 20, 2006 14:54:42 GMT -5
So I wrote this one day and thought I'd share with y'all. It's pretty important to me.
Working Title 20
Let's get this show on the road; Yeah y'all heard me; Ready to rush into this thing; Head first; No looking back; Envy; One of the 7 deadly sins; A story of my life; Hell; I'm envying life as it passes right by me; A temptation that just aint been wavered yet; Well today's judgement day; Get ready y'all; I'm gone rise; Straight out of the ashes my tears left behind; Oh Lord give me this breath; To leave it all behind; Hopefully something worth leaving behind; Those brown pools of light are my lighthouse; Pray, guide me won't you?; Lord knows you already have; It's hard sometimes aint it?; Realizing you have to choose between two worlds; Two identities; Two visions; To be able to move on; Get on with things; Odd how life forces maturity on you; So uncertain though; Full of unsureness; And then what?; The light blacks out; Gotta follow my heart on this one; All the God given strength; Dixie can't be my shield anymore; My excuse; My attempt at decieving life away; The illusion has to be broken; Yeah I'm jumpin' a little; Can you really blame me though?; It's an odd symbolage of fear; Especually in this age of terror; Where the next second; Everything you know will be gone; Yeah buddy; I wore that old rebel flag thin; With excuses; With sinful pride; And a surpemly moral arrogance; I mean seriously; Is anyone really that pure?; The books almost done though; And so is my last attempt at childhood; Oh gah though; That highway's so huge; So intimidating; Like a playground bully; Gotta take it down; Just to breath again; Just to let a gentle breeze pierce the tough exterioir; Like leather; Only more stubborn; That's me; Did you miss that?; Just another chain I gotta break off; The cold etiquette of my world; Just another choice Would I be a scallywag if I broke it off?; If I turned my back on a dieing breed; To embrace something so foriegn; Yet so foriegn; Nah; Not redundancy; Just flat out confusion; And adrenaline; Oh yeah; And a high of just realizing; That I'm about to be on that same road; The road to exile blends in well; With the road that leads to you; A road I've been avoiding for a while; Wish me luck; I'm about to merge with destiny y'all;
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Post by charlottedarcy on May 20, 2006 15:44:05 GMT -5
Wow, that was impressive. That was really really a great poem.
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Post by charlottedarcy on May 20, 2006 16:14:28 GMT -5
The ebb of the tide has changed with the stars The end of my life began with one love The sails filled with the wild wind while the swollen belly was the begining of the end.
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Corey Faulkland
Wizard
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Life is like a roulette wheel: Seventeen. Red.[on:Good show!][of:Bugger...]
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Post by Corey Faulkland on May 31, 2006 20:51:41 GMT -5
and yes it is a song of my originality that could probably be a poem
Take Me Away
Took the pieces of my broken mirror And threw them all away Took the memories I had of you That felt like Yesterday Can't help but want to keep looking back You were my guiding light Momentum's high can't slow the attack Not gonna give up the fight
Trapped in a bitter war Lost in a raging sea Can't find the open door To bring the light on back to Thee I feel so helpless I feel so weak Walking in this battlefield Unable to find words to speak
Theres so much I want to say! But I can't find a way to tell you I seemed to have lost my way! Can't seem to find the truth... Find. The. Truth.
I'm swimming in a pool of lies! With a frozen surface Trapped beneath its crimson tide! As I struggle to find purpose...
I can't find the truth (will you guide me?) I don't want to lose (Will you hide me?) I can't find the truth... Don't let the lies take me down!
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Robert Shaw
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Criminal
I was a child once, the fear of the world in my eye
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Post by Robert Shaw on Jun 14, 2006 10:24:33 GMT -5
Yearbook Can't help but sit still Just turning the pages Watching the memories fade away In the upper right hand corner Lie the last words that I heard you say
And I miss your voice And I miss your face We've been separated By that college choice We got all those letters and we viewed the same What I would give to see more than just your name Under a picture in a black and white frame What I would give to see your face again No, I can't help but sit here and look Sit and watch the pages turn Flip through the pages of my yearbook And look at the memories I yearn to repeat
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Robert Shaw
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Post by Robert Shaw on Jul 11, 2006 3:51:52 GMT -5
Its been a month, so.
Start to Finish
Dawn awakens bearing child and path, Few have patience enough to stay. With pure of heart and golden laugh, You may follow your true way.
Possabilities endless as oceans vast. At many points your trails shall cross. Each is special realize that, Without the crossroads all is lost.
Picture yourself in many years, Will specific moments matter then? The day you conquered all your fears? Or when you wondered what life meant?
Each moment you have, hold closely dear. Allow nothing to hinder your memory. Let not pride unfold to fear, And pressure not turn you blind.
Your life is yours and yours alone, One constant voice to give command. Orders followed bear a price. That in the end total unto death.
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Post by angie on Jul 11, 2006 5:07:08 GMT -5
Here is the wide assortment of my semi-good poems. Yesterday, During truth or dare You told us secretes Dark and deep You showed us you were scared
Yesterday, You made us realize our life’s not all that bad Once everything was said and the game done Silence fell over us Our lives seemed so bleak the day before Now they seem so good Because we have seen more
Yesterday, You showed us temptation, sin, darkness, pressure and hate You told us how it felt To come from a shattered family and try to prove your worth To a world who told you not to try That you were worse than filth
Yesterday, We did not feel your sorrows We knew little of your pain Now it seems as if we knew you As if only in passing and by name
Yesterday, You opened a window You opened our eyes We’ll never be the same
Yesterday, We realized you are a phoenix Risen from the ashes and smoke And that many are like you, They put on the same play Outside they’re happy showing nothing of there sorrow Inside, deep down, behind the mask They are full of pain
Today, Are bonds run strong and deep Where no matter of cold or evil can reach Friends forever is what we’ll be And all because you trusted me
---------------- This one and the next aren’t really poems, they are the first lines to poems that are not very good. These tears fall like rain This heart has been shattered Broken one to many times,
---------------- In your eyes stars are born and darkness dies A glance from you is hypnotizes
---------------- If anybody steals this I will chop off your head *growls* It’s something in a book I’m writing so even if you did it would be recognized by anybody who reads the book, assuming I can finish it and get it published. Lol Welcome, weary traveler to my home, This is where my seed is sown. All are welcomed from here on out, From humans to dwarves and giants to elves. But heed my warning, which is this: Darkness shall be drowned in fire Evil shall be swallowed by flames Thieving fingers will be burnt And spying eyes will be hurt. Now all who still seek my company Knock twice to enter The house of an elf.
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Deep within’s a heart of gold Deep within’s a love foretold
Meet me in the deep of wood Together we’ll discover all that is pure and good
Together, like eagles, our souls will sour Deep in live and in the sky We can watch the world go by
Deep within this dark blue sky Is the destiny For thee and thy
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Down here the world looks so bleak The cliffs I must climb so sheer and sleek I lay among the fallen dead Thoughts of you swirl through my head
I crashed and burned Just like you said Please tell me what you think
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Jade Estaci
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Yes, I know...back to the original hair color....
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Post by Jade Estaci on Jul 12, 2006 14:50:57 GMT -5
Wow. Yours are good, Angie. Mine's gonna seem really stupid in comparasin, but I wrote it at 1 AM anyway, so it's not that good to begin with. but here goes.
He said, “I need to talk with you.” She wasn’t worried, she thought she knew. This had to be about those boys. She had flirted with them, acting coy. Both boys had their eye on her. She was in for a reprimand, of that she was sure. Instead he said they were going too fast. She smiled inside and thought “At last!” She had tried and failed to tell him That she thought this was too much for them. She said, “I know just how you feel.” He said, “We’re breaking up for real.” She stared at him and blinked her eyes. My, this was a big surprise. She had thought a cool-down would be nice, But truthfully, this felt like ice. “You deserve mush better than me,” he said. She answered, “I want you instead!” He said, “this is what’s best for me. Please try to understand, you’ll see, That we are just too young for this.” Now that poor girl was really pissed. “Whatever,” was her clever reply. Please, don’t do this, Hon,” he sighed. “All we need is a little room, we’ll be together very soon. But if you like, until then, You and I can still be friends.” “That idea is as appealing to me,” she said “As is the idea of keeping my dog once she’s dead.” He said, “My mother wants me home.” She said, “one more thing before you go. I want you to know that I won’t pine. When you want me again, I’m sure you’ll find That I will be another boy’s girl.” He knew it was true, but it made his insides curl. As he walked away at a very fast pace, A single tear ran slowly down her face.
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Post by Brittany Garland on Aug 12, 2006 19:42:46 GMT -5
Once again, you capture my heart Vic. I love it. Of course you don't need to be told that you're amazing. Cause you should know it already by the numerous times that I have said it.
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Robert Shaw
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Post by Robert Shaw on Aug 12, 2006 20:11:42 GMT -5
Thanks, and right on cue, month and a day.
Angel's Call
Downward spiral arcs the lands Another meteor falls to Earth Guided by invisibles hands Rumble shakes a disaster's birth Crater depth unknown to man Vastly deep none dare to explore You claim you can't, I know you can For we all shall join the Earthen floor.
Single day each, our deaths shall come One by one we all shall fall Shadows cast upon the surface Darkened corners of solid walls In death comes life, such is true I am the keeper of the tunnel light Take my hand, I'll lead you to Your special place of eternal rest
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Charlie Jones
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Plays for keeps. [on:Ready to Rock!][of:Not Rockin]
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Post by Charlie Jones on Aug 25, 2006 17:25:05 GMT -5
Alright, so I made a poem today. Might suck, might now. -shrugs- Yet again, I'm doing this without relating myself to Charlie, so, yeah. You know what I mean. Her years of Solitude
You know…. Maybe I shouldn’t have been the way I was. It would have been easier, this life. How splendid would it be if I could just… live? And maybe not simulate death?
What a fool to fool herself. That was me, and that still remains. But continuing on, She hated the world. She hated herself. A solid wall separated her from them all wherever she went. But what was sad in this life of her solitude, Was that she was like every other person with four walls. And no guests.
Her sisters abandoned her for she was too far from them, She bore no resemblance past the face. Her parents estranged her, Or better yet, She estranged herself from her parents. A young age she did it, But she thought it to be too late.
Her friends didn’t stand the test of time Or stand her attitude. She wasn’t the right shoulder to cry or laugh on. The boys held no attraction to her For she seemed too isolated.
Her life was lonely, yet she didn’t know. Her feelings were angry, yet it was nothing different for her. She spent her life all alone. Her years of Solitude.
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Post by Artemis Tayern on Aug 28, 2006 11:11:33 GMT -5
Iron Defense one wrapped in a rage, His mind betraying, trapped in an iron cage, His sanity fraying, his mind stabbing the boy in his back, his once mental iron defense, has become nothing more than a mere fence
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Post by verina on Aug 31, 2006 22:34:42 GMT -5
I don't really have any poems that are appropriate since most of them were written when i was at my worst and lowest. This one here i mostly wrote in an attempt to let someone i care about know how i felt so its untitled...
Don’t go back He don’t deserve you Look ahead not to the past You weren’t his only despite it all You know this But still you seek him longing evermore for his embrace His touch I know it’s tough as hell Forgetting your love Who once loved you seeing him finally for who and what he truly is he ain't no good for you Your growing old Ahead of your time He hurt you so Yet you remained by his side Giving him all you had to give While he cheated, lied while he struck you down made you cry Don’t go back Oh please don’t go back To neglect and misery To love that was given once upon a time but no longer exists But in your eyes
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